My draft front covers

This was my First attempt at making my music magazine.I knew it had lots of room for improvements but it was the first time that I had ever used photo shop and really struggled to get to grips with it because I could not work the programme I decided that for my second attempt I would try to improve my image by taking out the background which is very dark.







This is my second attempt at creating my music magazine front cover. I believe that it is an improvement as I used the Lasso tool to cut around the image I also changed the colours of my writing so it stands out on top of the image but this did not work very well.I believe that the image is poor quality so I will try to get a new one.

 My third attempt is much better and finally looks like a magazine front cover. I have changed lots of things like my fonts, image ,writing style and sell lines.I believe that it is much better because I have put more effort in to creating a realistic set up and also my photo shop use is improving.I still think that the masthead is not the right font so I intend to change this.

The next attempt I made shows feed back which I received from Kaye.  

 I have changed the font for the masthead which I think looks much better.But I have added more things on like a extra circle which looks t0o much, I have decided to take off some of the extra things which I have added so that my magazine looks less cluttered,I will also use Kaye's feed back to help me improve my next attempt.

 I have made appropriate changes to my magazine and have addressed the areas which needed improvement.I have also changed my main sell line just to see what it looks like.I felt unsure about my image so I tried adding an image of a different model but I have decided to stick to my original because I have lots of images of her and believe that she fits better for this particular project.I still think that my work needs improving and could look better.